On the advice of mickPC, (who has been a great supporter of Hypo's stories, along with thePup) I post this here in the Shortboard Forum.
I'm not sure if everyone reads both Forums. The stories are fiction, I initially started writing it 1 year ago and have now re started. I appreciate comments and useful criticism. cheers

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