Mate thats an awesome first go at editing & the music was a blast from the past. I don't think you really need any video tips, you put it together nicely. Some dialogue would have improved the video or some text giving some explanation of some of the locations from the point of view of someone that wasn't on the trip. But I reckon your mates would be stoked with the vid...well done

Here I'll share one of my own non surfing vids & leave you with one last tidbit of advice & this also only matters if you want to get a few youtube views. Title & video thumbnail are important to tempt someone into watching your vid & you could probably improve on those. Video itself was cool...anywayz heres one of mine