These are interesting points, and I appreciate the direct advice.
Fortunately, the width is somewhat exaggerated by that last picture -- the metal sleeves that attach the wheels to the rear spar are only partway on. Fully installed, the width is about 2 feet less than shown.
Unfortunately reducing length is not really practical -- the 11' boom already hangs over aft. The mast will actually stepped well forward, as it is on its source boat (a Sunfish), only a couple inches behind the front wheel.
I agree with you about the twist problem, and haven't really been able to come up with a good bracing system to counter it. Right now I'm considering extending the winding along the full length both parts of the frame. This will probably add some stiffness, and may help with the twisting, but we'll see. I'm open to suggestions here...
So, landyacht's last sentence brings up an interesting question: why bamboo? Primarily because it's easy to work with. I'm not actually interested in building a super-fast land yacht -- considering the material, I'm a little terrified of that many splinters moving that fast, should things go wrong. My hope is to bounce along at around 10mph (about 16kph to the rest of the modern world).